What others thought... of our previous project, DRAFT!

What others thought of our previous draft copy of our first project:

• Emma Ford: "Good original idea but needs more work to it, such as music and editing"
• Richard Kish: "Make the storyline more understandable"
• Steph Chawner: "Good storyline, camera angles to be sharper, but good variety of them"
• Frankie Burchill: "Love the original idea but needs a bit more work to it to make the rest of the opening sequence a bit more understandable"

From these comments, we realise that the best thing to do is re-film but not change the type of thriller we want to portray because from these comments it looks like they enjoy the story and unique genre we wanted to show just hasn't been showed to the best of our ability, so we will start working on an improved idea in the next two lessons before re-filming.